Calm rivers flowing,
from the blue icy mountains,
weaving through the trees.
Flowing endlessly,
away from the cold season,
flowing to be free.
Through the changing lands,
far away from winters harm,
to the open sea.
A contest entry
- Haiku by SandraMVeinot.
360 points, ended May 14, 2007, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is a lovely piece of poetry with wonderful content. Well done and thankyou for sharing.
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excellent~
Very beautiful and calming...
Congrats on the 3rd place winner
I got 2nd and nice to meet you as well and do hope you come by and see me as well
Hugs
Susan~~~
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visual
I like it its very visual
u should edit teh background to match it
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Quite lovely
Fairy...I miss you, I got tired of hiding...did you even look?...hehe..this verse is lovely Krissi, you are lovely, I feel like crying...loves...Polly
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