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I Once Met a Girl

I once met a girl
when I was a child
who lifted me up
whenever she smiled.

I once met a girl
when I was a youth
who taught me to laugh again;
showed me the truth.

I'll soon meet a girl
when I have  grown old
who's worth more to me
than silver or gold.

Between now and then,
I'll sit in my chair
and I'll write lots of love poems
as I wait for her there.

Sometimes I'll get lonely
as I curl up at night
and I'll start to cry
longing to hold her tight.

Sometimes I'll feel sad
as the thunder of war
or pain of lost loved ones
knocks at my door.

But even in those times,
when I feel like I'll fall,
I'll think with a smile
of the girl who's my all.

I once met a girl
who lifted me out
of the sinkhole of misery,
self-hate and doubt.

And be it a thousand years,
two years or none,
I'll remember the girl
who I know is the One.

She'll stay in my heart,
and I'll love her forever,
Ne'er will I leave her,
not once, not ever.

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She knows who she is. I love you so much, sweetie.

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  • indomitable
    August 12, 2007
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    aww, this was so lovely and sweet. life comming full circle in love. *sniff* thank you for sharing.


  • Viva La Vie Boheme
    April 23, 2007

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    Dan, this is an amazing poem for a great person. You always post the greatest poems, this one is no exception!

  • Blackraign
    April 23, 2007
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    Great poem

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    April 23, 2007

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    beautiful

    She's very lucky Dan; lucky indeed to have you in her life. I wish you both the best. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem. So filled with love and warmth.
    Brian


  • happypurplepumpkin
    April 23, 2007

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    AWWWW!!!

    She's a VERY lucky girl, and you're very talented, Dan. This is a wonderful, sweet poem. Hope you guys are happy for a LONG time!


  • Mrs. Mautino
    April 22, 2007
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  • CrypticAngel
    April 22, 2007

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    This is such a beautiful write. Great rhyme scheme, and it is very touching. I think you could get 'the one' with this poem. Again, beautiful write.

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