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Page of Cups

The King doth calleth
and true I come.
I am a servant
in his home.

I speak in riddles
and in rhymes.
I have wisdom
past my times.

Of my chalice
do I drain
the dredges dry
of human pain.

Of hidden knowledge,
am I the source,
full of insight
and remorse.

I am inspiration
and a poet's friend.
I'll leave him never,
until the very end.

When life is over;
its course's run.
I've drunk this chalice,
drank it- done.


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option #1- A write concerning the image of the Page of Cups from the Tarot cards. Disclaimer- i don't believe in them.

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  • Rosalynd
    June 4, 2007
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    Good Pen

    Interesting subject. You disturb the meter a couple times, but your rhyme scheme works very well.

  • Opiate Dreams
    May 7, 2007

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    Nice write m'dear. I'm not a huge fan of ryhme, but you pulled it off wonderfully. Terribly sorry it took me so long to comment.