Beneath starry skies
We talked on and on
Just of this and that
Waited for everyone else
Beneath fiery skies
We sat together
On the cold concrete
Watched the fireworks flare
Beneath cloudy skies
During lunchtime
I would visit you
Let it be a surprise
Beneath morning skies
I left you a note
About how I feel
For Valentine’s Day
Beneath hazy skies
You confronted me
And I confessed
We’ve not spoken since
Beneath moonlit skies
I saw you once more
Wanted to speak
But found I could not
Beneath sunny skies
I tried to find you
To ask you out
I couldn’t find you
To be continued...
Author notes
Option 3 in the contest: Options for all you poetic people!!!. This is the story of what has happened to me so far this year. The reason the poem is not done is because the story is not over yet, and I have no way of knowing when it will be.
P.S. R.I.P V-Tech :]
A contest entry
- Options for all you poetic people!!! by moment liver.
675 points, ended June 6, 2007, 66 entries
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450 points, ended April 27, 2007, 38 entries
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600 points, ended May 12, 2007, 13 entries
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1300 points, ended July 11, 2007, 638 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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i liked it... very nice indeeed
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Awwww
I would have hunted that person down so bad lol. Good poem i like it. Good luck -
Ah, can't wait till you finish it. I loved it. Thanks for entering.
moment liver -
wow. it was slow. but good. i ahted how it ended. i wanted it to be longer LOL.
good job and welcome to the AP family... :]]
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this was a great write..i realy enjoyed reading this..your words were powerful and emotional as well..it flowed really well keep writting your talented and good luck in the contest.
XTashaX -
Oooo bonus points for it being a true story. How mysterious and romantic, I really hope the story has a happy ending. Great job. Best of luck.
~Oka/KC
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