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Intertwining Dreams

One morning I woke up after a dream,
Telling my twin sister of what it consisted.
She looked at me as if she was going to scream,
Since our dreams were similar but twisted.

They both started with macine guns fired by persons,
Us the sole survivor in each setting.
But similarities end as my sister's story worsens,
And the ending of mine is not even fretting.

In her dream she survives the gunfire,
Then drives a policeman in his car to a safe place.
In mine I survive by climbing on an airduct prior,
But mine ends in a can-can of a rapid pace!


Author notes

This really was true! It scared my socks off! (My twin sister is Zephyr Aryn at AP.) My sister's story is where our whole family was killed by men with machine guns, except her, because she hid in the downstairs bathroom closet with a phone, and called police. She then escaped out of an egress window (downstairs) and ran to the police car. She found a cop on the other side of the car, wounded, and put him in the car, driving to the hospital. MY dream went like this: I was in my school's locker room when I heard suspicious noises and climbed on top of the lockers and lay flat on the airducts above. When the shooting and screaming ceased, I climbed down to hear the can-can. I walked over to the noise and saw girls in yellow shirts dancing the can-can on top of the lockers being directed by one of the nerdiest kids in our school. He then stopped, walked over and oppened the door, to where his equally nerdy friend stood and asked, "How's it going?", to which he replied, "It's going good." He then walked back over to the girls and went on directing the can-can, and I presently woke up wondering what my problem is.

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  • Dirty and Broken
    June 22, 2007
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    *laughs*
    you're a silly goose
    soo strange


  • XxMysticalFantasyxX
    April 27, 2007

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    wow this is very interesting..very well written had a great flow and everything you have great skills and I cant wait untill I read more of your poetry. Best of luck in this contest!!