For I can lift the darkness
And uncover the glittering light
That lies beneath the ugliness of reality
And leave evil behind your sight
I can take you to the top of the mountain
Where the eagle cries above
I can lift your chains and give you freedom
I can show you peace and love
A contest entry
- Uplifting Poems Desperately Needed by StormGoddess.
700 points, ended May 3, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What could I change about this?
Comments
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Thank you for this wonderfully uplifting poem. These words speak loudly to my soul.
Vicki -
This will probably have more meaning to Vickie than most anyone could ever imagine. It seems so personal to the things in her life, and the words should show her that there is light at the end of the tunnel so to speak.
Thank you for the entry and good luck
Storm -
this is nice. uplifting for a change which is a nice break. I know that dark poetry has its own beauty but sometimes I just need happy...thanks.
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