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I am your Omission

When the evening is matured
and we are left to our own senses,
you seem to forget
that you even know me

A blonde,
size ten?
A brunette,
hourglass figure,
forgetaboutit...

I am your greatest omission,
your most thoughtful lie,
god forbid you hurt anyone,
with my unholy memory...

In a list

A contest entry

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  • azure85 gold member
    April 23, 2007

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    Welcome to Omission!

    A thoughtless omission of the other person, that leaves the feeling of omission present within the soul. An excellent use of the word, thank you for your entry. Good luck in the contest.

    Susie