Listen to your heart,
for it is etched with the scars and joys of existence.
Beating energy ebbs and flows,
but truth is forever held within.
That wisdom is life's mentor...
A contest entry
- Five lines - Amaze me... by Lavender Butterfly.
390 points, ended April 22, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i love it
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ur granddaughter ( ravenblood) is one of my best friends she showd me you and yes your great
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So deep and sincerely expressive... x Thanks for sharing. Love and light, Butterfly.
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Deep... well done.
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Thanks so much for reading and your great comments and applause. I really appreciate it
Gaylene
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aye, if we look wihin we we always find the truths we hold, there is no escape from the self a good piece, good luck.
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Thanks so much Ian for your lovely comments and applause on this I appreciate them
Gaylene
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