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This Heart Divine

Love revealing this heart to see
Spectacles of life racing with ever beat
Pumping memories into the midst of time
Keeping existince in reach
This heart sustains all I need

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 22, 2007

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    Very deep and meaningful, sincerely expressed in few lines... x Thanks for sharing. Love and light, Butterfly.


  • Poetic Tears11
    April 22, 2007
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    Wonderful

    I Love this one too and for 5 lines it's very very good. Keep up the good work =]