One defining moment could possibly
change the course set to life’s destination
With endless possibilities lying before
our drenched souls, immerse yourself
into your one defining moment and live
A contest entry
- Five lines - Amaze me... by Lavender Butterfly.
390 points, ended April 22, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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What a terrific lesson for life. This is what
each one of us needs to learn and live.
"immerse yourself
into your one defining moment and live"
and LIVE,,,wonderful. -
This has some profound thought in it and provokes it in me as well. You know...cause I am such a profound thinker and all...ha! Well, this had a nice rhythm and message lying in wait for our minds to consume. Great work and good luck in the contest!
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Yep, I know this defining moment, I have had a few too, you have captured the feeling of this moment brilliantly hun
Karen
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Thank you sis for the sweet comment. I hope you are doing well. Miss ya bunches.
Becky
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yes life defined,
to write, to read, to feel the words as they touch our hearts and souls
wonderful piece
loved ity
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Thank you brother for your time to stop by and read my garbble...lol. Defining moments are what make or break us. Miss ya bubba
Becky
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This is sincerely lovely with such captivating thoughts and expressions... x Thanks for sharing. Love and light, Butterfly.
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Sounds like a soothing soul swim. Sweet.
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It soothed my soul...AHHHHH very refreshing...
Thanks for your comments...now share that stuff you're smokin..
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Becky -
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Judging from some of your writes
I think yours is better anyway.
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