Beautiful dreams that never stay long
Like little butterflies dancing on flowers
Touching each flower briefly, leaving pollen
Smiles stretch across people's faces
When remembering these lovely visions
Author notes
hope u like it
A contest entry
- Five lines - Amaze me... by Lavender Butterfly.
390 points, ended April 22, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Lovely.
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Very beautiful, Sis
There has always been something magical about the butterfly. Especially when they are in groups. Nicely done and good luck in the contest.
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(Insert Flattering Comment Here) lol sorry It's nice I like it, the background is dark I like dark. The poem is bright, good contrast lol. I really like this short write by you sis. I love it like the rest. So keep up the good work. And I'll talk at you tomorrow.
Jordan lee
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Quite beautiful indeed, such lovely wording and majestic imagery... x Thanks for sharing. Love and light, Butterfly.
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...and a beautiful vision it is.
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