Sparkle of a raindrop,
gently kisses rivers flow,
outward circles of ever increasing hope,
crossing oceans deep,
life and love,
in a single drop,
hope knows no barriers.
In a list
A contest entry
- ........ by Gogetalife.
500 points, ended May 6, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
For sean
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This is lovely
I so love to watch the rain and the way raindrops dance and so true what you say here love has no bounderies
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Lovely
Calm, simple and elegant.
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a good poem, smiling verse across distance - hope is ever present i think, even in the mad dark times it still holds its spark
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this is beautiful very delicate and outstandingly crafted well done i loved this poem very much so xxx
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A very fine write indeed. I loved the elegant simplicity, and depth of imagery that you have here.
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brilliant
This is really cool, i love the hope that it holds within its lines, that perfect friendship we all strive for
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True and simple, no need for over-flowery words to get a solid message across. Love this clean simplicity.
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truer words have seldom been spoken/writen...I love the picture of the ripples in the water. I'm a firm believer in the ripple effect of our lives. keep up the great work. peace and light always, Kendal
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So Beautiful My Friend!!!
Hello mny dear friend. You have written such a lovely and heartfelt poem for our dear friend Sean. Your words will both comfort and encourage him. Your picture is so beasutiful and inspiring too!! You take care and thanks for sharing this with all of us.
Always, Sandy
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A lovely examination, indeed! My only discontentment lies with some of the grammar and punctuation: like, for example, the second line seems a bit rough, not entirely comprehensible. I also slightly wish Capitalization was used a bit more often. I do like the last line though, it's as if a wise elder is speaking to a curious young one using poetry and such.
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This is a very calm and exploring creation. I like it, and the message you are sharing.
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Wow...
It can really mean different things to everybody. I love it! A great write!
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This is a wonderful piece. Good luck in the contest, my dear friend. Hugs, Patricia
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great write,especially the last line...true to the picture...good luck in the contest you entered
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Oh my friend, this so lovely and so meanful..I am sure Sean will be thrilled to read this beautiful verse..Thank you so much for joining my contest and yes Hope knows no barries my friend..Excellent job
AJ
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