Your eyes
Forever growing darker
Your words
Pouring down like rain
And every time I look at you
it looks like a storm
The torrent of insults
Coming like rain
The wishes I were gone
Echo like thunder in my head
The glares
Like flashes of lightning
And your words
Forever
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Falling
Like Rain
And everyday
Looks like
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A storm
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Great write. So original. Loved it.
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wow never i've seen a structure like that, very creative.
... good connection among words and the way to express it, a very good metaphore of course...
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