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ready

Waited and
int
ox
icated

Alone
jus
tstoned

Twistingtalesandcottonsnails

Emp
tycokemachin
eswith
alf
railly

Games aren't really
there anymore to appease

itsalljust
sounds
rolling around
bubbling up
and sounding
so deep in the brain man

Excell and pro sell
there's not much left
all bereft

hiding there
reveal here
out there
is
wh
er
e

i'll be.
all alone

and stoned.

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I did this not completely sober, and listening to music.

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  • WorstNinjaEver
    April 26, 2007

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    It's actually pretty good. I mean, it needs work - but I believe that its imperfections make it so good. I love it.

    -Chance