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Meine Nase (auf Deutsch)

Ich habe eine Nase,
Es ist groß, und Gelb, und Rot,
Meine nase ist sehr sehr haarig,
Es war ein Butterbrot!

Wenn das Wetter nicht so gut ist,
Meine Nase ist Kalt und sehr sehr klein,
Aber wenn das Wetter wunderbar ist,
Es ist schrecklich und gemein!

Meine nase, sie Fred heisen,
Er wohnt auf mein Geschicht,
Und er ist vierzehn Jahre alt,
Isch finde das Interesant nicht!

Author notes

This is not meant to be offensive to Germans. I just thought it'd be cool to write a crazy poem in German. Anyone who speaks German, please tell me if I've spelt any German or got the word order etc wrong.

Please tell me what you think, in English please!

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  • subliminal girl
    September 9, 2007
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    Funny poem xD
    I'm German and don't worry I didn't think it was offensive hahaha...
    Okay, so... maybe some things you might want to change: it should be "Meine Nase, sie heisst Fred" insted of "Fred heisen", and it's "auf meinem Gesicht" instead of "mein Geschicht". =)


  • vierna
    September 9, 2007

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    I think you meant to say "ich" not isch in the last line. also, I believe interessant is not capitalised as it is an adjective and not a noun. great write though...you gave me a giggle!