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Wings Of Love

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The longing of your touch, sweet whispers of the wind,
Melting through your eyes of love, memories of when.

Heartbeats still dream of passion, wanting even more,
As we create rhythms, like waves crash ocean shores.

One breath completes the others, two in unity,
Weavings of each song we write, plays in harmony.

Your words etch deep within, filling my paint-less art,
And all the gifts of love you bring, heal my broken heart.

So take sweet tender soul, my love through all tough days,
On precious angel wings, I'll send to you always .

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A Collab. done with the One and Only Poeticweaver
A blessing you are my freind! Thank you for the honor of working with me. Love ya.

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  • pkoirish
    July 10
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    very erotic

    thanks i needed a loving thought..

  • Topnotchsy
    June 17

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    This is really beautiful. Collaborations often show at the seams, but this one feels like it came from a single (gifted) pen.

  • its real good keep it up

    • LMAO I love how you comment short and sweet. Show em how TEXANS DO IT


      Sheesh,

      Thanks love


      Passions

  • Gosh, this is just so very beautiful, it made my heart do a little flip, you are very gifted


  • Swtpoetryman
    April 5

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    YOU WORK SO WELL TOGETHER!

    So take sweet tender soul, my love through all tough days,
    On precious angel wings, I'll send to you always .

    From someone who has written nearly 2 thousand poems that have a gentle rhythm and flow - it is easy for me to see - no - to know - that the two of you are perfect syncopation with this sublime and divine piece filled with genuine emotion and love!
    Peace & Love - to the both of you - for a job well done.

    One breath completes the others, two in unity,
    Weavings of each song we write, plays in harmony.

    Well sung indeed!


    Earl.

  • awsome rhyme here

    soft and loving. what a heart you have. I want them all in a book on my shelf. hugs, Nic

  • Thats so sensitive and moving . youre the angel of light and love. My favourite part is ummm ...all of it!

    • Thank you Glenn s
      it seems I had help writing this lol it was a collab done with a wonderful soul. His words always seemed to blend perfectly with mine. We dont speak much but his words layheavy on the heart


  • Ellis gold member
    December 5, 2008
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    Like the rhyme and the message.


  • Swan song gold member
    August 31, 2008
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    very beautiful sesnous and truly lovely I lvoe the flow here!!!!


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    August 24, 2008

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    I very lovely and so beautiful piece this is
    You both are very talented poets,
    and you two work so great together.
    Your words are stunning, I think this is
    an excellent write.
    I very much enjoyed it.

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce


  • jazzcat gold member
    August 5, 2008

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    Lifting

    This is a great read, so well crafted with love and passion. I love this line:

    'Heartbeats still dream of passion...'

    Phrases like that make this flow perfectly and strike all the right chords.

  • Eusebius
    June 9, 2008

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    Bravo

    A wonderful and terrific poem! Perfect cadence throughout out--17 syllables to the line gives it a flow like a pellucid mountain stream! bravo... bravo... bravo...


  • LittleAnn
    April 27, 2008

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    Hoodwink

    What a beautiful poem full of love and hope, easy to read and understand, it was a joy for me to read this.

    An excellent write.
    Thanks for sharing!

    Keep on writing!
    Annie


  • tawk gold member
    April 25, 2008

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    Hood-Winked!

    Such vivid imagery and emotion within this amazing and touching write. Wow I so enjoyed reading You both are very talented. My prayers and thoughts are with you I hope you feel better real soon. The hospital is the pits I was there recently. I hope you enjoy being Hood-Winked I hope it brings a smile to your lovely face. Have a wonderful day Theresa


  • Shamanicmusings
    April 25, 2008
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    Hoodwinked

    This is most profound and serene.
    A delight to read. &&&Kath&&&


  • Twinstar
    April 24, 2008

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    Hoodwink

    What a beautiful poem, and delicately crafted, nice rhyme and assonance. Beautiful!

    love & Light
    Debbera

    You have been hoodwinked by "The Poetic bandits"


  • grannyeri gold member
    April 17, 2008

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    Just dropping in to say hope all is okay, and better. Poetic Bandits are thinking of you today - liked this poem you wrote here - collaborations are always so well done - seems to bring out the best in both poets. Liked the rhythm, rhyme, flow and picture used for this write. Keep writing...


  • Angelflower
    April 11, 2008

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    Aww.. this was so sweet.. The emotion was great for a Collab... I really enjoyed this piece.. It brought a smile to my face... This was just so romantic..Beautifully done..
    Jetleena


  • darell
    April 8, 2008

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    Passionate

    Oh my goodness baby, this was so beautiful.
    It was a tenderly affectionate piece filled
    with all the magic of a marvelous romance.
    You're incredible to say the least.
    I feel asthough we're twin souls.
    Keep up the fabulous work my dear.


  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    April 6, 2008

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    I like the third dn forth lines. Love like Magic is what you make it. True love will last forever and ever and gives life much more meaning.


  • Gwenevere
    March 22, 2008
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    As your name suggests , you write with "Passions Promise",A lovely poem, Ros


  • esroddo silver member
    February 20, 2008

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    So beautiful and dreamy and breath taking write

    But I could not expect any less from you. You are the bomb in writing hot write of love. Outstanding piece of work. LISA


  • poeticweaver gold member
    February 7, 2008

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    Victorious!


  • stavykm gold member
    December 25, 2007

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    So Beautiful

    I love ypur poem here! The title Wings Of Love is perfect and the picture is beautiful. Your poem writes beautiful imagery as well as the flow in nice and sensitive rich with love and care. Wishing you a Merry Christmas. Excellent Write!
    Kelle Marie
    stavykm


  • poeticweaver gold member
    December 4, 2007
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    Now this is a really awesome piece!


  • Beautiful-N-Broken gold member
    November 26, 2007

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    Your words etch deep within, filling my paint-less art,
    And all the gifts of love you bring, heal my broken heart.

    I hope that one day I find this, and it doesn't change or go away when I least expect it.

    You have a way with words, my friend. I really enjoyed this piece of work. Keep it up!


  • Kari gold member
    November 16, 2007

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    This is really beautiful. Each line flowed together. I think that this collab turned out just right. The imagery was incredible


  • CherryOnTop
    November 10, 2007
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    This is breathtaking."On precious angel wings"


  • ennovy silver member
    November 5, 2007

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    Magnificent Piece of Art...Bravo!

    This is amazing beautiful and so full of love, compassion. Like being in the arms of an angel when read....you feel tender, love, and care.....novy


  • Bluebattosai
    October 27, 2007
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    Nice, I like it.
    You use the past and present.


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    October 17, 2007

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    delicate beauty in these words

    strengthening and uplifting too....love is just so
    beautiful...loved stanza's your word etch deep within,
    filling my paint-less art...so take my tender soul,
    my love through all "tough days." our precious angel
    wings, I'll send to you always.
    Poetic beauty, it reminds me how good it is to feel
    peace and home when all my husband has to do is just
    hold me in his arms.
    ears2hearyou
    Kathleen


  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 9, 2007

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    Lovely work. Great words of touching love so gentle and soft. Love the closing lines, they say so much.
    Beautifully done!
    Love,
    mystic


  • anaisnais
    October 2, 2007
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    Angelic whisperings subtle and sweet from a true angelic writerxx

  • eternal-devotion
    September 21, 2007

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    Beautiful.

    "Wings Of Love" what a beautiful title. Your first line is symply devine and the last line is just perfect. This is well written and nothing deeds to be changed. I just loved the first two lines.


  • ellipsist
    September 19, 2007
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    beautiful... wonderful

    flow and message... just the right amount of a delicate touch and sensual feel to this...

  • stavykm gold member
    September 15, 2007
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    Beautiful Write

    The Title Wings Of Love is perfect then the picture both compliment the poem as a whole for sure then the first line the longing of your touch, sweet whispers of the wind then the last line On recos angel wings, I'll send to you always. Such a precious poem. I felt so cared for as I read and reread your poem. So beautifully written, you are very gifted at writing poetry and I admire you very much thank you stavykm


  • poetryality silver member
    September 15, 2007

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    The wonder of this poetry is that two souls united to make one glorious work. The meter and rhyme is exquisite, as if it was one thought manifest within two spirits. Very beautiful sentiments. I cannot distinguish who wrote what, and that makes this poem perfect. Thank you for affording me the opportunity to inhale these words, both of you!


    Much Love & Respect ♥

    Renee


  • blondone
    September 14, 2007

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    Oh this is way to beautiful I love the emotions that entwine between the words and the imagery is one lovely picture great work with PoeticWeaver another big dog here on AP this poem is a lovely dedication


  • Entwining Beauty
    August 26, 2007
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    on your page it comes up as poems I am focused on or they not poems people are working on sorry if i got it wrong it was a very touching poem very beautifully done


  • Entwining Beauty
    August 26, 2007

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    beautiful collab (why are you working on it? ) it is already amazing I'd leave it as it is very beautiful

    • PassionsPromise gold member
      August 26, 2007
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      im not working on this one lol..i was trying to see where you got that from Poeticweaver and i only needed one shot and we got this ..it was perfect to me as well
      Thank you hun for your kind words.
      Hgs
      Tory


  • The Unknown Poet1
    August 10, 2007

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    thi is a nice blend of talents here expressing a love that we all hope to attain oneday. I enjoyed the rhyming read


  • Katyv
    August 7, 2007
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    Very beautiful

    Very good and very good rhymed. It is very beautiful! I like the beautiful front.


  • twinkling of an eye
    August 7, 2007

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    Wow... this is so magical. It just glows with love and beauty. This is so sincere and heartfelt. Thank's for sharing... I'm bookmarking!


  • crimsondew
    August 6, 2007
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    So Sweet

    beautiful... very well written... Good flow...


  • Griswold gold member
    August 5, 2007

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    Beautiful collab, and written on my birthday no less. Very well done hon. I like this a lot...Love ya. ...Scott

    • PassionsPromise gold member
      August 5, 2007
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      Thank you we appreciate the kind words. Happy Belated birthday. Glad you enjoyed this. Always appreciate your loyalty in reading/
      Love ya
      Tory


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    August 4, 2007

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    WOw, you two did a great job with this one!
    I loved every word in it. Very sweet and
    loving words. Well done and thanks for
    sharing it here!




    Jeremy0826
    Love you!


  • Endeavor gold member
    July 17, 2007

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    Amazing


    One breath completes the others, two in unity,
    Weavings of each song we write, plays in harmony.

    Your words etch deep within, filling my paint-less art,
    And all the gifts of love you bring, heal my broken heart

    The words and application of the theam in this are inspired

    Love it all, first to last stanza

    For the 67th time in 10,372 Comments, I say the words amazing

    Beautiful, Rick

    I regret I can only give 3 Bunnies


  • individuality gold member
    May 8, 2007

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    a good poem which twists and turns love's glances - ah, in this crazy world we live in love is ever present.

    • PassionsPromise gold member
      May 8, 2007
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      We thank you so much for your kind words..Yes soemtimes life seems to be a never ending roller coaster. Thanks so much for taking the time to read this collab.
      Glad you enjoyed it. MAny blessings to you hun.
      Vsutton


  • DogFish silver member
    April 27, 2007
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    Lovely sentimental thoughts,well expressed...

  • spoondawg
    April 23, 2007
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    great

    i like it alot baby. i think it was a great collab.

  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 22, 2007
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    Lovely Picture!

    I like what you have done with our words we weaved together...THanks for sharing your heart and talent with me as well. Be blessed always sweet soul, for you are also such a blessing! Much love to you and all you hold dear, your friend, Timothy aka poeticweaver~

    • PassionsPromise gold member
      April 22, 2007
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      Your awesome!!

      I loved it as well, and the words flow together as meant to be. **hugs** back sweetheart anytime. Again I thank you, Love ya.
      Victoria

  • SoulWhispher
    April 22, 2007

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    Great

    THis is truly a great collab, it is both a great read, but so well written with such great form, great job, Love John


  • Pretty Little Thing
    April 22, 2007

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    good work

    I like the structure and the imagery. A lot. I found this to be very sincere and heartfelt. Feel free to comment on one of my if you get the chance. Keep up the good work.

    • PassionsPromise gold member
      April 22, 2007
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      Thanks hun we are glad you enjoyed it I have already been to your page and read one and really think it was awesome I will indeed be back to read some more. Thanks for your kind words
      Victoria


  • jacbgd2 gold member
    April 22, 2007

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    lovely

    I enjoyed reading this beautiful piece of art work... It is very captivating to say the lease... Your presentation is magnificent... I simply love your Angel's picture.. It is prescious.... Very good write!@!!!

    • PassionsPromise gold member
      April 22, 2007
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      Thanks so much for your kind words. I enjoyed penning this alongside a great poet. Glad you enjoyed it. And will check into the word in question
      Vsutton


  • PrincessOfFire
    April 22, 2007

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    A very commonly used title but your words were far from that. Such sweet sentiments. Love is my favorite subject. May I suggest a small change here> Heartbeats still dream of passion,
    Overall a very nice piece of work. Thanksfor sharing.
    Rose

    • poeticweaver gold member
      April 22, 2007
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      Thanks

      Love the suggestion, was going to put that, but now I have that 2nd opinion to back my first thought up. Thanks.


    • PassionsPromise gold member
      April 22, 2007
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      We appreciate your kind words , glad you enjoyed it
      Victoria

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