Voyeur of the sky
showers of meteors reign
just a streak of light
Within a twinkle
we exist then disappear
transformed once again
What shall we become
when darkness encloses us
will our light yet shine?
A contest entry
- Seventeen syllables by Hiatus.
1350 points, ended May 1, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A beautiful haiku chain depicting the night time sky, your description of the meteors is wonderful.
Good luck in the contest...Sue
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intanglio2ring you have created such a vision with your imagination you have penned so well in the Haiku form. Excellent how you have shown us something that is, then it disappears, but then leave some hope at the end that there will be something else to come of this, unique! Thank you for sharing...good luck in the contest and have a wonderful evening. Ken IBT
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Thanks!
Dear InBetweenThoughts,
With showering meteors this weekend, I was inspired. I appreciate the applause & great comment!
Tang
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