When my days are dark
you are always there.
The bad times I have
you always share.
When I am confused
you're there to help.
and you never
leave me by myself.
With your love
I can carry on.
When I am weak
you are always strong.
If I need courage
I can depend on you.
If I get in a rage
You will help me through.
when I am selfish
your heart you give,
and so you shall have mine
as long as we both shall live.
Doreen H
A contest entry
- Love & Romance 101 by poet2angels.
475 points, ended April 24, 2007, 17 entries
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Silver trophy winner
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550 points, ended May 12, 2007, 23 entries
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480 points, ended June 5, 2007, 59 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I love you. by Poetryintheblood.
350 points, ended May 24, 2007, 13 entries
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doreenh
Thank you for commenting on my work -
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I feel this way about my wife. She is my rock, my heart, and my soul. She has been there when I need the help to get through the rough times and she has rejoiced with me in the good times. -
"You will help me through.
when I am selfish
your heart you give,
and so you shall have mine
as long as we both shall live."
AWWWWWWWW!
soo beautiful!
what a fantabulous poem
it's really perfect!
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doreen H
My poem is called Unconditional Love and I wrote it for my husband of 44 years. I tried to put a heart in the title (I have read the rules) but could not do it. Sorry -
Thank you for your lovely entry, Josephine
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This kind of love is very rare. And it was beautifully expressed in this poem. I think this is a well written poem. It sounds like a hallmark card to me. Thank you for entering my contest.
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doreen H
Thank you for your comment. much appreiated.
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doreen H
This was written for my husband whom I love so much. Hope you like -
Wonderful job, this poem is just what I was lookin for. THank you so much for stepping up and giving an amazing poem with great feeling!!!!! NO half-done job here. Best of luck!
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doreen H
Thank you so much for your lovely comments
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i would like to wish you the best of luck in this contest we both have entered. you have written this well. viyanna rosemarie
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beautiful show of devotion in this lovely poem! TY for entering my contest!
Lynda
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