Why so glum,
When there is sunshine
And rain?
Why so sad,
When there is joy
And pain?
Why so low,
When there is laughter
And tears?
Why so down,
When there are hopes
And fears?
Why so sour,
When there is chance
And fate?
Why so sore,
When there is love
And hate?
Why so dismal,
When there is day
And night?
Why so clouded,
When there is faith
And sight?
Author notes
I'm loving life.
Please tell me what you think
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AH!! This s amazing. Really, I see as about seeing all the things that life has to offer and there are always good things mixed in with the bad and vice versa. I liked the structure too. Well done darling! xxx
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Oh, this one is awesome!! Very thought provoking, made me think of taking the good with the bad and seeing the glass half full. That my not be what you were saying but that is what I got when I read it. Wonderful.
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Yes! That's what I meant. It's just that if you want the rainbow you have to deal with the rain... but that doesn't mean the rainbow is any less beautiful. Cheers for the comment! xox
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good poem! love it. like i love you! lol xxxx
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