"Why are you living still?' he asked me
"your useless and have no purpose."
"no one likes you, no one ever did", she told me
"why dont you get it over with already."
These words keep ripping at my heart,
keep going through my mind
"why am i still living?" i asked
"Theres no purpose and im no help to anyone"
" no one likes me i already know that"
ive already tried to get my life over with."
The only thing to do left anymore is to cry, as the tears fell out of my eyes, rolled down my face and fell on my wrist.
I thought those thoughts in my mind again and i cried out in pain as the tears of blood rolled down around my arm on to the floor. This pain i felt was not physical pain but mental pain, The tears of blood never stopped pouring.
"Are you happy now?" i answered
"i served my purpose right here and now."
"who would like me now" i answered back
"ive gotten it over with now"
As i lay in the puddle of tears,
tears ive bled, tears of pain,
tears of torture, tears of fear, my tears of blood. Now i lay here in
crimson red.
Please tell me what you think
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Some people are just not fit for the love nor the minds they captivate, no matter who they are.
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Wow that's really sad, I loved it nice job.
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it's beautiful
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this is awesome! wow...just amazing...the pain can be felt through the computer screen so well it almost hurts. awesome write.
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wow
i think its beautiful and a awesomw use of words to express what u mean.
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Thank you for entering my contest and good luck. this poem was obviously written with alot of emotion and feeling. That emotion comes through very clearly to the reader. I think that you have done an excellent job on this poem.
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this poem was so good im......speachless!!!!!!!!!!
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So painful and very touching, the pain that you've been carrying so much inside, the heavyness of it growing more and more everyday, the scars and big wounds that seems like forever.....
I hope you're feeling better today,
Antonio
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Brings to mind a famous poem that I once saved in my files. It's inspirational, if you'd like I can send it.
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