I love you John; I shouldn't have said goodbye.
A contest entry
- One Liners... Maddening things you wish someone had told you. . by Melodies.
450 points, ended April 22, 2007, 17 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Oh, you must be John... and I am so sad for you!
Here is a hug
and a wee kiss
and something to eat
and a little pet to cheer you up
and maybe another pet in case that one doesn't work anymore,
and something pretty
and pretend you have one hundred of these all over your wall
. I am serious, not kidding, when I say that your line really tugs at my heart.
I love your line.



