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Vulnerable?

Darling can't you see my eyes,
Can't you see the tears so threatening...
Baby, baby can't you feel my aching
as you slowly walk away?

I need you to feel me
and let me know you are here-
I need a feeling of safety
in this darkening atmosphere.

I want you to know me
and my secrets untold,
I want you to expect it all
when I fall down cold...

Darling I want you, I need you-
can't you see?
Baby, baby...I need you- I want you...
to know all of me.

And I don't know why
I need to feel you so close-
when all of my life
my heart's door has been closed.

It just doesn't make sense
but I feel vulnerable...
the thought of you caring so-
makes my fingers-woah...tremble.

So darling...baby...
hold me close and don't let go-
spin me around in circles
and let my heart-beat slow...

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