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what happened

what ever happened to the good old days ♥
when we could talk laugh and have it our way. ♥
what ever happened to the times when we'd never fight.. ♥
and we were there for each other whenever we cried. ♥
what ever happend to barbie dolls,♥
beggin you to do my makeup and then take me to the mall. ♥
what ever happend to the little mermaid ♥
sittin down and watchin the new years parade. ♥
what ever happened to tag your it.. ♥
somewhere along the line we started throwin a fit. ♥
now we yell and fight ♥
almost every night.. ♥
i dont know what to do.. ♥
cause sis im lost without u ♥
we both got our hearts broken. ♥
i just want the good times back and im praying and hopin..♥
that we soon won't hurt any more.. ♥
we can let our problems fly out the door. ♥
chelsea babyface.. i want you to know theres not a better sister in this world.. ♥
not a better sister that i could ever ask for. ♥
and i want you to know whenever you need me ill always be around ♥
chelsea dear.. i want you to know i don't like to let you down.. ♥
chelsea please forgive me for the mistakes that ive made.. ♥
it was never your fault yes im the one to blame . ♥
dnt know what else i can possibly do ♥
but your my big sis and i wanted u to know i'll always love you ♥

this is dedicated to my sister i let her down so many times.. never again..

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  • PaulieWantACracker
    March 2

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    wow thats like sooo heart felt, i feel that i have let my sister down also,this is a really good poem, one that should be published i think


  • The Cube
    April 22, 2007

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    Great!

    Reminds me of a poem that my friend wrote a while back that he read just last Friday. Really good with the "flashbacks" on how life use to be so cool and now it just seems so dull and pointless.


  • crushed
    April 22, 2007
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    Good.

    I think this is a very good poem. Very relatable. I think anyone who has a sister understands the love/hate bond. As far as the rhymes go, they felt a tad predictable but then again when I first started writing rhymes were all I new. This is still a very lovely poem though. I look forward to seeing some of your other works some time.

    --crushed


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    April 22, 2007

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    Superb

    A very fine write, just as it is. As free verse I don't see any problems with it. And I nice tribute to your relationship with your sister.