Waiting
Pain echoing
Screaming in this tunnel
Heartache filled with darkness
The hurt and solitaire
Waiting
Mind racing
Can't take it
Calling out for someone
Someone that's unknown
A helping hand
Just one healing touch
The touch will never come
Waiting
For something
Something to hold onto
Longing for a reason
To make this life worth living
Wanting...
Wishing...
Waiting...
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A contest entry
- Open Your Mind's Eye {CoNteST} by PerfectImperfection.
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I think you captured this well, great write. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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oh this is sad, and touching. Such yearning, such desire to be saved. Reaching out for that one person who can save us. You have caught this emotion, this need, beautifully. great job
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You have penned a sad dark poem..... filled with much emotion for despair.... wanting searching.... I like the way you have ended this poem.... expresses the inner pain of a soul well...
goodluck in the contest!
Tracey -
First of all - Thank you for following the rules!
Great interpretation of emotion pulled from the picture. Nice imagery; a deep sadness, a longing... Thank you so much for your entry & best wishes in the contest!
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this is great! i checked the pic and this suits it to a T! you did a fabulous job with this! keep writing dear. thank you for sharing this. God bless you always
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