Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Shhhhh I'm not done Preaching

Missing image
I see you
and I breathe you
in
deeply

but as I exhale,
I feel something amiss
I'm not sure what,
but here it is

Shhhhh, your sweet mouth,
shhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I say now,
Shhhhhhhhh, I'm telling you
I can't take it

Shhhhhhh, just behave
shh, I want you to stay
do you still love me?
even though I don't shhhhhhhhhhhh?


In a list

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • My Darkness
    April 25, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    wow this is a good one... i could never write like you, you deserve better than a green piece of shit, but hey that's just me! nice job sis..