Hello,
nice to meet with you today,
I thought I would have it too easy,
but you changed all that...
I'm going to take you on,
but rule 12 says no,
so I back up and let you whine,
even though I feel I should be showing
that you need to do more
you need to feel more
you need to be worth more
I take it all
and you take my seconds
and such the conflict that arises
it's almost insane
that someone so smart
just can't realize they've been had
just let go
before i kill you
Author notes
A contest entry
- Conflicts: Good versus Evil by Stonecosta.
530 points, ended May 2, 2007, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Oooh, good and evil in the same manifestation? Cooooool. The end makes it very strong.
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wow... you are aggressive! i'd be fearful of you if i didn't know you were such a softy, lol! Good stuff! Good luck in the contest!
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