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Where Do I Begin

I want to make a difference in the world,
I want to touch millions of hearts.
All I need to know,
Is where do I begin to start?

A girl named Rachel,
Made it easy for me.
I will show the world,
I will make you all see.

When one begins to fall,
Dont leave them behind to fall alone.
All it takes is a few words,
And they can feel at home.

Rachel showed us a path,
Thats so easy to take.
Just show a little kindness,
It wont be a mistake.

I too have fallen, once long ago,
I was left behind to fall alone.
I felt so lost,
Like I had no home.

But Rachels words, touched our hearts,
I was helped to my knees.
She helped us learn,
She let us see.

Give your hand,
Just for a moment would do.
And you'll feel the happiness,
Washing over you.

You'll give someone kindness,
And get some in return.
It was Rachel's lesson,
That helped us learn.

Treat others like people,
For we all need a friend.
Its not too late to give up,
Its not yet the end.

Help someone up,
Dont leave them to fall alone,
Just lending your hand,
Would lead them home.

Reach out, lend your hand,
Rachel gave you the path,
That would help you stand.

Author notes

*Inspired by a Rachel Scott presentation about the Columbine shooting I saw. It made me cry...

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  • darkreave
    May 4, 2007

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    nice

    didn't we see this at school ?

    nice poem ,

    * sigh * there's a chance everyday for me to help someone but i just walk by and tell myself it's not my problem ...


    • ObliviousReality
      May 5, 2007
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      That's why I wrote it...Oh Gabriel. You should be a little more considerate! But meh...Not the first person. Thanx tho

  • hiddenpain
    April 27, 2007
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    Awesome!

    Another great poem from you! ive been gone for awhile but im back! keep up the great work.


  • Sle3p
    April 24, 2007
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    kewl........

  • LIve For Today
    April 21, 2007

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    an other great write from you , you know how to speak from your heart , i have been touch by your work here and your poems , good luck in the contest


    • ObliviousReality
      April 21, 2007
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      Thank you! I really appreciate that, and I'm glad I was able to touch someone's heart. That seems to be a growing difficulty now-a-days.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    April 21, 2007

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    Excellent!

    Yes I remember seeing the presentation that
    inspired this write from you. A very beautiful
    poem you have penned here.

    I love these lines:

    "I want to make a difference in the world,
    I want to touch millions of hearts.
    All I need to know,
    Is where do I begin to start?"

    This question is one that we should all stop
    and ask ourselves. Not just today, but every
    day of our lives. If we all had this much
    compassion and motivation, the world would be
    a much happier and beautiful place to live in.

    This poem is very moving and touching.
    Thank you very much for your entry in to
    contest. I appreciate it and wish you the
    best of luck with it! Keep up the wonderful
    work here!



    Jeremy0826


    • ObliviousReality
      April 21, 2007
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      Thank you so much! Indeed...I would love to see the world doing this...Think of all the pain we'd save ourselves*I've spaced on how to spell that! sorry!*from... A person, especially one my age, can only do so much. But if you were to have more, age put aside, the world would be more the paradise many of us so desperately wish it to be. Thank you again for such a kind comment!

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