lemony sunshine
delicious as childhood
-April ice cream cone
Author notes
The ice cream parlors have all been open since March but I had my first "cone" of the season today.
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A contest entry
- Seventeen syllables by Hiatus.
1350 points, ended May 1, 2007, 18 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wonderful, seventeen syllables that ring-a-ding-dong with the radiant joy of simply giving an ice-cream a tongue licking, a sorbet-sigh, loved it.
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very uplifting
brightened my day and made me wish it was spring...
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This is a good haiku here. I liked the simile here and how you described childhood. Congrats on the gold.
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beautiful
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Don't be surprised. Your haiku rocked in it's simplicity! It pretty much captures the idea.
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this makes me think of days in the park, it's so straight forward and simple.
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I'm quite stunned by the trophy, many thanks. The ice cream cone that inspired me, "Hiatus", had already been reward enough!
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ahh the changing seasons...
this is perfectly wrapped in spring sunshine and the risks of those April cold showers thrown in..
well done Gary...
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*getting in line*
Oh yummy! What a great haiku, with such a yummy image in it too!
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"getting in line"...it would have been a good title for my little -ku!
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