I feel like Alice
falling through the hole
watching
wondering
where I might possibly go.
You catch me
hold me
but like the queen of hearts
I'm just another card
that you hold.
I'm spinning
falling
into your Cheshire eyes
you make me spin faster
and fall harder
into those wonderful eyes.
I'm running
trying to keep up
you keep going
and not a clock
but my heart
is what you hold.
I frown
I cry
because like the flowers
people tell lies
and my heart
can take no more.
Like Tweedle Dee
along with Tweedle Dum
I will sit around
and tweelde my thumbs
while you lie
to my unknowing mind.
And unlike Alice
I will stay
in this decetful world
that you have made.
Author notes
With a title like Queen of Hearts, what could I write about, if not Alice!
A contest entry
- She's Everything You're Not by Exodus.
1050 points, ended April 27, 2007, 14 entries
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Comments
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I have to say I did expect some people to write about Wonderland with this title, it is kind of obvious where it came from. ^_^
I am not sure about your references to the title though. I tried to make the title option hard by saying that you could not write about the title directly, and I am not sure if this does or doesn't (I'm just all muddle headed today XD)
But nevertheless, I enjoyed reading this piece, very unique, and unique is always a good thing ^_^
Thanks for entering and good luck. -
written with heart
This is wonderfully written. However it lacks hope. -
interesting
i never really thought of making a kind of love poem out of wonderland, but i do like how you tied the characters into this.
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