Sitting Here Day By Day,
We All Wonder,
[What If This Dream Is All We'll Ever Have]
Will We Ever Be "Happy" Again?
[Can We Ever Smile Through The Lies]
Dreaming Of Happiness,
Of Perfect Love,
The Day Everything Falls Into Place,
[When Will We Find All The Pieces]
They're Scattered In The Wind,
[Will You Bring Them Back To Me]
A True Love Held On To So Long,
We Can Make It Work,
[Baby Please I Dont Want To Hurt]
Everytime I Look At You I Feel So,
Breathless, Heart-Wrenching Pain,
Do You Even Notice It?
[When All My Other Feelings You See]
I Loved You
& You Loved Me,
[How Oh So Perfect It Could Be]
But The Dream Slowly Faded When You Said,
My Mom Called Me Last Night,
She Knows Everything,
I Really Like You But I'm Sorry,
[I Felt My Heart Rip Into Pieces]
Now I See You With Her,
And I Know,
That It Could Be Me,
[Wrap Me In Your Arms And Dont Let Go]
I Want You To Be Happy,
But It Hurts Me To See,
That The Girl You Are Loving,
She May Never Be Me.
I Lay Awake Each Night Thinking Of You,
As I Lay On My Tear Soaked Pillow,
I'm Wishing You Were Laying Next To Me,
[Can You Dry My Tears Once More]
If I Just Lay Here,
Will You Stay With Me And Just Forget The World?
[Never Leave Me Alone Again]
But Darling I Love You,
[Do You Love Me Back]
You Made Me Happy When I Hade Lost All Hope
[Dont Make Me Feel Hopeless Once More]
I Want You In My Arms
And I Sit Here Day By Day,
And I Wonder
[What If This Dream Is All I'll Ever Have]
Will I Ever Be "Happy" Again?
[Can I Ever Smile Through The Lies]
I Will ALWAYS Love You,
[Baby Come Back To Me]
And Be All I Ever Wanted Us To Be.
But I'm Here Without You Baby,
Cant You See,
All That You've Done For Me?
[Let Me Be Everything You Need]
Author notes
, inspired by Jason's Myspace name
Option 3 in the Contest Four options for word/thought congelation
[x] Love. Lost love, broken love, you love each other but you don’t...Fallenangel671
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fallenangel671,
What a beautifully tragically written love song; I bet this would sound amazing recorded.
Very nicely done, very sweet of you to do this for a friend
I wish you luck in the contest
Stay safe
~Amanda
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How sad that you feel this way. The capitalization of EVERY word was slightly distracting. Thank you for entering my contest.
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wow this was great I could see this layed out like a song and creating it's own beat strong flow and deep content....thank you for adding this to my list and keep writting
XTashaX -
zz ZZ zz Zz Zz zz Zz zz, huh. oh, JK, hmmmm, Great write,
"Dreaming Of Happiness,
Of Perfect Love,
The Day Everything Falls Into Place,
[When Will We Find All The Pieces]
They're Scattered In The Wind,
[Will You Bring Them Back To Me]"
I liked this part...
I'll ttyl...
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beautifully written
Lot's of feeling in this. Very nice job. -
right from the beginning i knew it was for joe... well done darling, you did very well on this one...
*sigh*
now if only i could do something to stop you from feeling this way
~.~Yvonne~.~
Baahltres
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hun its not like you cant not do anything, it wasnt our fault that his mother found out or how old he is, we have to wait until the time his right, his current gf has absolutely horrible pms and can be really bicthy alot of the time, and everyone says sooner or later he will be fed up and he'll end it
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this is awsome. I loved it so much. It is so full of hope and pain, love and devotion. It is awsome. Great write.
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thanks for the comment hun and i appriciated the feedback<3
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