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Winter





The days are short,
The darkness closes in fast.
The air crisp and cold,
Reminds me of my past.

Landing in soft drifts,
Snow sprinkles down.
White crystals sparkle,
This is winter's gown.

Memories of simple times,
Revisiting your bliss.
The world about you shimmering,
With winter's frozen kiss.











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option #3
Write a poem about your favourite season. Any length, any style, but I want something directly realting to a season and not something that happened to you one season.

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  • OurxBeginning
    April 21, 2007

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    Winter is my fav season too.
    You described it's beauty very well..
    and also the aspects of life.
    Short but powerful.
    Keep it up.

    ~Miraculous~

  • star wars fanatic
    April 21, 2007
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    finalist

  • star wars fanatic
    April 21, 2007

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    nice

    Very descriptive, creating a lot of imagery and really a great description of the season.

    Wonderful job, thanks for entering, and keep up the great work!

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