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Parchment Paper Test

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                   Original artwork by Renelle Sommerville
                                   Media: charcoal and oil 



Black and white

Moonlit night

Parchment paper painting trial

Mountains stark
Black and dark

Renirific’s painting style


Rowboat’s prow

Wonder how
She makes it look so easy
Water’s glow

Ripples show

Cause it’s kinda breezy

It ain’t square

But it’s there

Rectangular and painted

Parchment test
Not the best

At least now she’s acquainted

Well that’s it

For this bit

Of something really stupid

Should have writ

Just a bit

About her Zak and cupid

Author notes

This is my 7th collaboration with Reni and her wonderful painting. When she sent me this one she said, "It's nothing - I was just trying out some new paper and this was just to see how it worked." So, since she was just "goofing around," I decided to goof around too. Was fun though. Sorry there Renirific.

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  • Ellis gold member
    November 27, 2007
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    A great poet should not goof around
    You should stay serious like me
    Goofing around is quite unsound
    Unfit for the poetic community

    Tiki Cat
    The Authority on Poetry

    [Have I been here before? You see, this one is so unmemorable that I don't remember it. Tiki, genius cat]

  • Ellis gold member
    May 2, 2007

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    Purrfect it is NOT!

    Tiki here; never fear
    I will not eat the painting
    But, it is clear as I leer
    It gets my lowest rating

    When something makes no sense to me
    I know it is a human's best
    Full of mistakes so I agree
    To file it with all the rest

    If you were a cat you'ld understand
    How such a one could leave you blind
    Won't criticise a poem so bland,
    So here instead I'm being kind

    Tiki Cat


  • Fallen Hard
    April 24, 2007
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    love it

    I really love it alot.. the black n white really nice!
    Fallen Hard


  • catz Moderators member
    April 21, 2007
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    Sorry, Paul... you have talent, too
    I didn't mean to ignore your expertise

  • catz Moderators member
    April 21, 2007

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    Well, Paul, fooling around in fun or not, you wrote one terrific poem, and the picture... lovely. Your friend has a lot of talent

    A cute piece, very catchy and descriptive.


    Dee


  • Ishtar
    April 21, 2007

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    Hahah!
    Oh, Paul. Never a dull moment when reading your poetry!


    I really liked it. It had a taunting sort of sound to it that captures the reader in.


    Thanks for making art from my 'test'

    Love always,
    -Reni


  • NyteShade
    April 21, 2007

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    very nice i love how all of it ryhmes black and white, moonlit night. Rainboats prow wonder how. Just loved those.

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