Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

all i want


I want is
all to stop
to Hear all
and for everything to drop
I see you
and I know
who you are
your just another guy
With another cute face
here with me
By the fire
and
someday you’ll see
that I am just as good as everyone else
And none’s better than one another

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Dead Star--x
    April 24, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    you write a very nice message ♥ thanx for entering & good luck!
    PrettyX

  • hose30
    April 21, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    You r words are true and touching. I lied this and great imagery. Can you give me feedback on my poem The tear.