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Cry Wolf



Something shining in the dark,
Is a dream I cannot own.
For I swear I have no love,
For anyone alone.

A beautiful and heartfelt cry,
Ringing through the still air.
Is only mine this time,
Trust me, I swear.








A contest entry

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  • xBrocken-Dreamsx
    April 21, 2007
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    ok

    i like it but it could be longer


    • Lj-
      April 21, 2007
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      Thank you.
      The limit was ten lines.


  • Floorboards
    April 21, 2007

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    good

    very good, well written and very evocative. thank you very much for entering my contest and good luck,
    floorboards.