This is a promotion
and not for sale, so
come take a ride,
or you'd better go hide
from a real commotion.
If you got a lot,
you'd better drop that pride,
if you've got a little,
just leave it behind and
bow to the might of the Sky.
A contest entry
- 150th trophy celebration by Floorboards.
525 points, ended April 21, 2007, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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for me it gives this metaphorical feeling of high and lightness, again maybe it's just me
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the ocean throws the MOtion upon the sandy shores
with commotions moves the masons to reinforce their castles more
the horizon bows the sky down to touch the boundless sea
but ships are lost while crossing that curving destiny
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beautiful, Matt. thank you!
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nice one
nice one, very lyrical quality to it, good stuff. thanks a lot for entering my contest and good luck to you,
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thanks! I'm not one for epics, so your contest suits me fine!
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