Your absence is my weakness
rattling my being
My eyes full with tears of longing
Filling my cup of sorrows
Overflowing at the brim
Taste my tears
Feel my love
In a list
A contest entry
- A Cup of Kindness - To Be Judged This Evening by CarolDesjarlais.
525 points, ended April 21, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Exquisite metaphor.....
My eyes full with tears of longing
Filling my cup of sorrows
Overflowing at the brim
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HOW BEAUTIFUL AND SWEET!
Truly when our loved one away our heart suffers until they return.
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sweet, very great write, i've known a feeling so similar to the one i felt when reading your poem, that seems like another life now, hummm.....well great piece i enjoyed it thank ou
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We might miss the one we love but the memories will always make them seem right there...
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Outstanding
It's always sad when you miss someone special believe me I can definitely relate to that, as I believe that everyone else can too. An talented poet like you can make the emotions become so real and lifelike that you should be receiving that trophy tonight....
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sad day
missing someone can bring tears flowing, and it will add to be cup of tears. Loved the way you wrote this. nice job.
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Oh, to sip on someone's sorrow
no more sacred taste is there
and to know your sadness runneth over
makes me wish that I was there...
dear poetess...
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A cup of sweet bitterness. Lovely job on this. Good luck.
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