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Lost My Composure




lost my composure
feeling sorry for myself
hurt someone I love



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  • 2lullabyhaven
    April 22, 2007

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    PerV...

    The good thing about wrongs is that they sometimes can be righted. Get to work, friend. Awesome Haiku.


  • Bazza silver member
    April 21, 2007

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    two claps ..for being a bady boy !!

    Well it sounds sincere and that is the main thing... so it makes it a good write even if you did wrong ..


  • Zeus the Woman
    April 21, 2007
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    this tends to happen, unfortunately.

  • sunshinegirl
    April 21, 2007

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    Uh OH!!! Thats not good my friend, but it will turn out ok in the end. I have never been any good at haiku's. But I do like reading them when they are done well, such as this one is! Hope all turns out ok for you!!!


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