Grasped tight by a hand
strangled by the beauty
pumps throughout my soul
blaze burns upon me
rays shimmer down beauty
golden light glimmers
silky dusk blanket appears
twinkling lights that guide
on a journey made afar
have a hand so beautiful
hold tightly on to me
strong felling of security
never shall I fall
warming feel,fire blaze
from all that loves me
will help me on my way
keep my fire a blaze
until the day I return
Author notes
1. How Long have you been on A P; 2 years
2. user name; Scented kiss
3. Age; 26
4. How often are you on A P; 6 to 12 hours
A contest entry
- Give Titus a Send Off by Tercil.
300 points, ended June 23, 2007, 4 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Audition Round by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended May 14, 2008, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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The form and general idea of this poem works, its a little scattered in parts but, it works. Congrats you have made it past the audition round.
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Thank you this is an older poem of mine, never got around to editing left behind poor poem glad you enjoyed my poem thank you for putting my into the next round
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50/50 for following rules
10/25 for overall poetic ability
12.5/25 for Creativity in writing, pics or backgrounds added. -
Great!
The imagery and feel to this work made me FEEL it and, to me, that is the most important thing. Thumbs up!
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I did like the poem.
It has a nice flow.
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good,
Gripping words of morale boosting strategies within this peice. Nice work
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thank youso much for bronze may you be safe on your travels
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very good.
nice sensual post .. nice to read poetry that shares feelings/emotions.thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest..MM
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