Between the curtains there is a small crack
And if you look through it you will see
The slither of a silver moon shining,
Up in the sky with the stars, watching,
Glistening and burning into their deaths,
So you can watch a glorious scene-
Get out of bed for a while
And watch this fantastic performance.
A contest entry
- 150th trophy celebration by Floorboards.
525 points, ended April 21, 2007, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Beautiful write with beautiful imagery. I liked the part of the moon and the stars. Very celestial. Good luck in the contest.
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nice one, well written with some good imagery, very well done and thanks a lot for entering my contest,
good luck,
floorboards.


