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Nighttime Performance

Between the curtains there is a small crack
And if you look through it you will see
The slither of a silver moon shining,
Up in the sky with the stars, watching,
Glistening and burning into their deaths,
So you can watch a glorious scene-
Get out of bed for a while
And watch this fantastic performance.

A contest entry

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  • HaleyMary
    April 21, 2007

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    Beautiful write with beautiful imagery. I liked the part of the moon and the stars. Very celestial. Good luck in the contest.


  • Floorboards
    April 21, 2007

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    nice one, well written with some good imagery, very well done and thanks a lot for entering my contest,
    good luck,
    floorboards.