after these three years
since things have been bad
i thought i would heal
and once again be glad
but i have not healed
my heart is still sore
i feel as if
i will only hurt more and more
for me
my heart wont heal
and my nightmares and fears
will just become more real
i feel as if
my time is coming to an end
like i am stuck here on this earth
with just pretend friends
i feel all alone
and i can't describe why
that is why i am the way i am
and that is why i cry
i feel my heart break
more and more each day
and it hasnt healed
since chris died and went away
my soul is broken
i can't go on
my heart hurts
from dusk til dawn
my misery has grown
and i can't make it cease
if i tell anyone my pain
my pain on them will release
i hurt too much
for this pain for someone to endure
but my faith in them stays
and i hold them close more
i hope one day
this pain will end
and my heart
can finally mend
Please tell me what you think
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you write some powerful stuff, stuff that comes straight from the soul, again, beautiful write
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thank you...that is sweet...see i tend to write from some experiences i have had or others have had and i write deeo things most of the time so...yeah i have poetry i havent posted yet
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this poem is great i love ur writting
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thank you
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You have all the time in the world
It always hurts. In time the pain fades and all the pain is replaced with all the great memories. Thouse are the ones that count lol
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i know what you mean....it will just take a very long time considering everything i have been through...IM me and i will tell you everything
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you're awesome, you're awesone....i feel your poetry each time better....really....honestly....awesome
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thank you
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Good job
Wow Elizabeth I never new. I'm srry we haven't talked in a while . but i hope we can start again.
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thanks
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Such a sad poem, your sentiments are well expressed and easy two read and understand. The grieving process takes some longer than others, but there will come a day when you begin to feel better, and not feel guilty that you do. Hope this comes soon, and you can get on with your life and live, join clubs, go out and have some fun. That last verse says it all - you hope your heart can begin to mend soon,
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thanks grandma
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i like this, i hope things work out and you can start feelin better, i know its hard sometimes to get through the rough spots...???? but i like this.
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thanks
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great
really cool... feelings painted here came across very nicely. the words flowed perfectly... keep at it poet.. this is a guift -
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thank you very much
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that is beautiful u are so skilled at writing
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thanks...so are you
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Hey hun, nice write. Hope all is still good and well with you. *hugs* love ya! Ttyl
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thanks nick
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Sad
I hope things will be ok for you. This was a really good poem. Are you feeling ok now?
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i think i am going to be
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