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You

the smile upon your face
the sparkle in your eye
the way your tears trace
and how you touch my life

your concern and your gratitude
your genuine thanks
your apologetic sincerity
and that look on your face

your bitten fingernails
and the hands that I hold
the words flowing from your pen
and the stories that you've told

your sense of humor
that I love and adore
your personality unlike
anything I've seen before

your principles and morals,
the way that you teach.
you'll be a great missionary
to those that you preach.

every second my thoughts
turn over to you
and my love shall forever be
entitled to you

Author notes

For his birthday, his mother had everyone go around the room and say what we appreciated about this wonderful guy.
and that is what has inspired this poem.
although it could never be sufficient to the real deal.
this guy is absolutely amazing.

and it was our one year anniversary yesterday.



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  • Decorus Somnium
    August 14, 2007

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    So sweet, so beautiful and lovely. I love it! I wish someone wrote a poem for me too
    Best wishes and Keep writing

  • rockys8r
    May 1, 2007

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    Hey hun!!
    love the poem, and he is so very lucky to have a woman even just half of you if at that!! Miss you, ill call asap, k?

  • steave riley
    April 21, 2007
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    i love you so much darling!!!!!!

    YOU GOT THAT!!!!!!!!