On cold mountain sits a man
alone, enlightended and tangled in lies
he is lives up on high.
Author notes
came to while reading about a zen monk a thousand years ago in china
A contest entry
- 150th trophy celebration by Floorboards.
525 points, ended April 21, 2007, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this has the makings of something pretty good i think, you've got a bit of time to edit if you wish, thank for taking the time to enter my contest and good luck,
floorboards. -
also unedited sorry short on time i am
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