This whole day has meant nothing to the world
I've done nothing, said nothing, been nothing
Bored holes in my eyes with a TV set
But I refuse to let it go to waste
I'll build a rocket, mentally of course
And blast off to the planet Earth tonight
Maybe I'll see an Earthling on the way
It's been so long, I forgot how they looked
But then again, that is a lot of work -
I'll put it off until another day
Author notes
Blank verse on boredom.
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Comments
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yes this is definitely one of your worst- writing without a point would do that, lol.
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don't we all feel this way sometimes.
-Pap.

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nice write.
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i like this line: I've done nothing, said nothing, been nothing...i smiled after reading your poem because it reminds me of my days experiencing boredom!!!goodluck!
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I liked this one
It's just how I feel sometimes. Isn't it lovely that we human beings can share feelings like this, it makes me feel I belong!
Petit Moineau
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