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Hatred

This dark deary tunnel seems to have no end

This so called light at the end of the tunnel doesn't seem to exist

I hate this pain and sadness;This suffering too

I hate this tunnel and the the things in cahoot

My farther and my mother are no help at all

They scream at me every time I fall

I hate this so called family, and all its stupid members

I hate my life and my parents so called love

I am hurt and abuse

Beaten then left alone

I hate the way I am never amused

They say they love me truly, but then they toss me asided

Some family they are, I wished they go and die

Although this tunnel has neither light, nor end

I guess i will have to stick it through, and just hope that the light will shine through soon

Author notes

Don't worry this stuff doesn't really happen to me. I was just thinking on how terible it would be to be an abused child.

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  • s p i r i t song
    May 29, 2007
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    Sad. the picture on the side brings it all together. nice write


  • willowprincess
    April 21, 2007

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    good job. i didn't think you were talking about yourself, but i'm glad you clarified. otherwise i woulda had to drive over there and knock some sense into ya. lol.
    btw, check the spelling on your title.


    • Childsight
      April 21, 2007
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      thanks and yah I can totally see you coming over to my house(you should know where it is) to knock some sense into me.