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Gone

Abandoned place
Life is gone, cold chill sweeps in
Was it ever here?

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A haiku about the bleak existance of those left behind.

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  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    April 21, 2007

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    "A haiku about the bleak existance of those left behind." hehe! that was good so was the haiku! oh and its spelled "existence" thanks for entering! excellent work and good luck in my contest!!!




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