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Midnight Assumptions

As the clock strikes twelve
I wonder –
what is your business

Are you studying for the exams
with your notes?
Are you watching the midnight news
with your insomnia?
Are you in the deepest sleep
with your snores?
Are you in a noisy bar
with your tequila?

Are you masturbating?
Are you making love?

Are you thinking of me?

I assume,
the last one is right.

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  • sense surreal
    September 3, 2008

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    hmmmmm....bunga ng malilikot na pag-iisip

    sana lang na sana no? all the what ifs and their possibilities

    astig ka talaga
    sana noon pa nabasa ko na mga obra mo

    Anna Lee


  • pattyann4500
    April 21, 2007

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    I love the ending for this. You are probably correct in just assuming it. Great job! Hugs, Mom


  • line shakes
    April 21, 2007

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    hey..i tell you what.. you are good. all smiles here. this is very cute and sweet..beautiful ending. we all like to assume..and it is nice to assume something as lovely as that...nice.