If I had one last chance,
I'd take just one more glance
If I could,
I would hold onto you,
All our plans have gone askew
I miss you so bad,
now that you're gone
If only I took the time to tell you how I truly feel,
I wish this wasn't real
All I need is another chance
Please, help me
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Hannah Duffin
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maybe change the last line so it starts with please, but toherwise i like it and i know how this feels
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yea,
uhuh, like i dont know how i could change it much,like please----what---- u noe? well, thanks for reading it and I have pleanty of other poems to keep you busy lol jk, get back to me
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dont'like ths peom so much, i mean, i's a good idea and everything, but it doesn't have much....oh, what's the word?....strength, uh...structure, no that's not it...uh...
i guess what i am trying to say is that it doesn't tell a lot other than the fact that you have nothing....
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