There is something I have to tell you
And this is coming from my heart
From the moment I first saw you
My whole mind has torn apart
I found it hard to say at first
But then my feelings became more clear
So now I have to tell you
Before my courage will disappear
As I wrote these words for you
I imagined you were here with me
I took your hand and held it tight
Hoping that something more could be
I imagined that I was flirting
Showing you my feminine side
Trying hard to be diverting
With my feelings being implied
Only when I imagined that
You were flirting back with me
Did I write this poem for you
So that my feelings you could see
The truth is that i'm in love with you
And I have been for a while
And I hope you feel the same way I do
Because that would make me smile
A contest entry
- How Do I Tell Him???? by Paulies Cracker.
415 points, ended April 28, 2007, 19 entries
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very very good
hi there - returning the favour - this poem is great - the rhyme and flow beautiful - the content meaningful - a pleasure to read - yes -; say it with a poem - last line could be- "Now that would really make me smile" I will read more of your poems - keep on writing - Bless God - Joe
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awsome write hope this has a happy ending your writing is similar to mine only better keep writing
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its nice to read that you have something on your heart that you need to tell this person which you deeply love and feel for and the way you imagined him holding your hand tight as you walked along with him and the way you were flirting trying to get his attention and by writing him a poem because you have been in love for awhile and wanted to see him smile
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Soft, subtle inflictions of emotion are such a big drawing point for the reader. It pulls you in slowly, without your even realizing what is happening and then before you even know it… you are part of the scene yourself. Nice work!
♥ Touchof1der
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awwww this is beautiful!!! it was simply amazing and i loved it!! thank you so much for entering i hope you do well!!!
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The truth is that i'm in love with you
And I have been for a while
And I hope you feel the same way I do
Because that would make me smile
It is a great melody of the heart...So intriguing words here...The script is softly revealing there a story of the core which demands for the universal meaning of the tenderness ...The crescendo of the thoughts hauled here are truly amazing and touching..Very impressive work is here... a great work...
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