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Over-Time

Years...
Spent hoping i could change,
But nothing is that easy,
I should know.

Time...
Spent alone inside my head,
And for what?
I don't know.

CHORUS:
I'm holding on so tight,
To the lie that's slipping away,
I visit forbidden places in the night,
And am not myself during the day...(The Day...)

The Dark...
A place I am afraid of,
A place where I am free,
But no-one knows.

Dreams...
Black holes that lure me deeper,
Through the silence of empty hallways,
Towards the light of the Truth,
I turn away, I cannot face It,
I can't accept what has haunted me for so long...

(CHORUS)

I am the shadow of a person,
A girl that tries so hard to please,
I am the reality that is hidden,
The Girl I wont let anyone see.

(CHORUS X2)

Author notes

Well...it isn't exactly a complicated song... so isn't that good!

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  • FelineMuse
    April 27, 2007

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    In your head... it's in your head...

    "Spent alone inside my head.." I feel really alone inside my own head sometimes, too. I honestly think that having telepathy wouldn't be too bad. I'm from a big family, so privacy doesn't really exist in my mind.. hehe.


  • RhiannonMari
    April 25, 2007

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    it's pretty good to me. though again with the hurting my eyes with the font color. had to highlight the words to see it better. good write though, i liked it.