I never knew a love like this
My heart is swollen deep inside
You melt my soul within each kiss
And fill me up with lovers' pride
Each thought I have consists of you
You've penetrated my being
I've never known a love so true
Only you my eyes are seeing
To delve into your mortal soul
Stripping you bare of human skin
I can't believe my heart you stole
I'm overwhelmed with love within
Your kisses set my soul on fire
Your embrace makes me lose control
Can't imagine getting higher
Such virtue shall my heart extol
In a list
A contest entry
- How Do I Tell Him???? by Paulies Cracker.
415 points, ended April 28, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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well, that's a way to "tell him!"
"can't imagine getting higher" -now there's a love that leaves you feeling satisfied!
awww, to be in love! you make it sound so damn easy!!! this is so sweet and filled to the brim with adornment!!! 
Rianna (yo sissy!)
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oh my gosh... this was AMAZING!!! i really enjoyed reading this poem.... thank you so much for entering and i wish you the best of luck!!!
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Beautiful
You know how I'm a sucker for love poems and this one touches the heart. The rhyme and flow are wonderful enhanced by the abab rhyme scheme. Now I'll have something nice to think about as I drift off to sleep after work. Thanks
Love,
Amera
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